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Now that was fun. I like the story of the woman without the head.

“I don’t think she would’ve been shown like that” thank you

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Thank you for reading, Prajna!!!

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That thumbnail at the beginning looked like something straight out of a Mr Ballen video 😳😳😳. I loved the flow of the story though I must say & if I ever go into a place like it, I’m praying that the eyes in the back of my head kick in very quickly 👍😳

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Thank you, Gerard, for reading! I love your comment and hope those eyes in the back of your head kick in, too!

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I’ve watched too many videos of Mr Ballen’s to NOT want to have eyes in the back of my head if I’m ever stupid enough to think of going in a place like that. Hell… I’ll take my chances OUTSIDE thank you ☝️😳👍

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I found this to be an interesting essay on haunted houses. As a fellow Halloween heart, I've often found myself seeing things that go too far. I live an hour away from mckamey, and I've been asked to go there by someone I no longer talk to because I felt they often went too far. I love ghosts, witches, spiders, all that stuff but real or simulated murder is a no for me. People that can't see that, I stay away from them. Congratulations on publishing your essay. I'm glad you've found a place to write as you want to

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